tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1883001295037143231.post6963109475845777207..comments2023-06-28T14:14:44.020+05:30Comments on dollops of a dream...: Ignorant KnowledgeAgnimita Chatterjeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17523352420143788599noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1883001295037143231.post-51580798164402984402010-08-27T20:22:05.730+05:302010-08-27T20:22:05.730+05:30Well Twisha, that is quite a good question... beca...Well Twisha, that is quite a good question... because I haven't explained anything, I have just transformed it into a paraphrase.<br />Don't be disheartened, there is much to the piece that can be thought about, explained, and expounded.<br />And about the hope of poetic savior... again, that's perspective of you. Still, it's a treasure for my effort, a reward to my work.<br />So, thank you for your comment.Agnimita Chatterjeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17523352420143788599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1883001295037143231.post-72320417935915901702010-08-26T01:37:21.697+05:302010-08-26T01:37:21.697+05:30Damn, Agni, why did you explain?
There will never ...Damn, Agni, why did you explain?<br />There will never be any poetic savior.<br />The poem is beautiful. The title is beyond adjectives. Perfect. Loved it.T. Mukherjeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17097646879283934280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1883001295037143231.post-43846826020862307902010-08-25T20:35:11.728+05:302010-08-25T20:35:11.728+05:30Well, the very essence of the piece is "murki...Well, the very essence of the piece is "murkiness". The structure is a deliberate effort to accentuate the blurry vision and mission of our authority towards "complete literacy".<br />The lines "Rattling on the...knowledge" shows the irony of the real picture of life. Yet, the 'fire' brings in a ray of hope that even if there are illiterates, it is not a dead end. They still have the hope to rise and shine, if given an opportunity. <br />But again, that is a vague and blurry vision, which can most probably result into 'tears' of failure. The smoke, in connection to this, is a metaphor for illiteracy which is given an evil touch to shroud and swallow all, only to highlight that the number of literates are actually a minute figure before the vast crowd of illiterate people. <br />The poem abruptly ends, but again, this was a conscious effort of apprehension and suspense, leaving it on the readers to think and comment whether it is indeed such a dark end that literacy is heading to, or there will be a poetic savior of goodness.<br /><br />I hope this would clear up your doubts a bit, though I would love to know about the 'different strands' you had thought of.Agnimita Chatterjeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17523352420143788599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1883001295037143231.post-25878075278874048112010-08-25T08:57:05.505+05:302010-08-25T08:57:05.505+05:30Well..... I am finding it a bit difficult to under...Well..... I am finding it a bit difficult to understand what you exactly want to say through this poem. I can discern a few different strands but would you mind making it clear.Black Piratehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12592976958164423730noreply@blogger.com